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1. 选修课给学生带来很多好处 2. 选修课也对学生产生一些负面影响 3. 我的观点 On Optional Courses Optional courses bring some benefits to our college students which could broaden our horizons and cultivate our interests in different fields,and what’s more,it makes the life of the students colorful and enjoyable. But everything divided into two,the optional courses also could bring some negative aspects to us,firstly,some students just wanna kill time at the optional courses class,they are not involved with the optional courses at all.secondly,optional courses waste our precious time to learning the necessary courses. As far as I am concerned,the optional courses is always important and necessary for every students,because we need a wide range of knowledges to meet the needs of the fast development of the society,as long as we have a good attitude to the optional courses,I think it will be very useful and helpful to our futurel life. 修改后的如下: 1 选修课给学生带来很多好处 2. 选修课也对学生产生一些负面影响 3. 我的观点 On Optional Courses Optional courses bring some benefits to us college students which could broaden our horizons and cultivate our interests in different fields(为什么把定语从句和它的先行词隔那么远),and what’s more(连词使用重复),it makes the life of students colorful and enjoyable. But everything divided into（devide into）two(Each coin has two sides),the optional courses also could bring some negative aspects to us. Firstly, some students just wanna kill time at the optional courses classes(some students just choose optional classes to kill time), and they are not involved with the optional courses at all. secondly,optional courses waste our precious time to learning the necessary courses.(optional courses waste our time which should be spent studing necessary courses) As far as I am concerned,the optional courses are always important and necessary for each students, because we need a wide range of knowledge to meet the needs of the fast developing society. As long as we have a good attitude toward the optional courses, I think/believe it(指代什么呢) will be very useful and helpful to our future life.